【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 k& s1 B4 W& W0 C% i) r歌词我附在后面。
5 T* e2 n! r) N% BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# `1 [& [& @- ~0 j& L9 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& Y/ [5 W: L. E5 S! B( wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& F6 b& X3 Q0 Q/ f) Y' o; b2 Q5 G5 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; Y+ j- B* k8 Y! i) x2 VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( n: S# o" T/ M" L! }Nothing can compare to my love
- T) Z0 k- W3 d; D/ MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ q7 W7 C% r4 T0 a# n/ A$ B* Z, CI want so much to see inside your heart
  C- n) s, j$ p- P$ ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% G, F, j$ A" r: G& q1 f4 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ o9 G+ g6 l# {' Z& q# MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 O& S" I! N8 u% `: `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" q" Z; f2 G- z& S$ s* y  n8 m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 |+ b7 J" `1 O: ?' A' E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- Q; r% R# H% o1 Q& M) `3 l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ W4 A) I" o& J4 E! Q4 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( `% [4 [4 m& ~! D* |4 r  a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- D+ ?$ |$ q+ {  a( S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 U2 d! n9 _$ m, w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# x. y4 j3 Z; _; I3 a5 d& U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 k; O; c% @* Q9 h- @; _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ s' ^% F6 r; M4 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 j6 {0 v% K, N8 s* k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' E" ~3 D4 E" n$ w5 y# [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 L8 y& u* J/ |- T1 ], r. q. s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 }: a8 C' |/ O3 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& v" w8 |0 Z3 I8 ^& M2 j6 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 Q( O4 i" o: ~9 K7 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 n2 \7 [8 C1 N0 J" x- ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 u! w2 {. a$ q3 s8 ^2 a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 B/ b( [5 ~2 q" J& o4 D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# h+ s' B/ w/ u9 G& L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- m7 N8 V3 x6 H# v# {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ E8 U* c* I. ]( c$ L! [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>